Movie Funny Story by Steve Greene Centaur
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It's ok.. Just needs improvement. Other than that, it was kinda good. Not like your other diaries though. Like.. "Diary Of Steve The Noob" and "Diary of Herobrine the anti-hero". Those were some of your best books. Like, the Herobrine one was funny. It was comedic and entertaining. It was lengthy and had a funny ending. The STN one has long series, entertaining battles, adventure, comedy, romance and so on. This book was a little dull.. Not much adventure. And the
Ok.. Needs improvement.Review-
It's ok.. Just needs improvement. Other than that, it was kinda good. Not like your other diaries though. Like.. "Diary Of Steve The Noob" and "Diary of Herobrine the anti-hero". Those were some of your best books. Like, the Herobrine one was funny. It was comedic and entertaining. It was lengthy and had a funny ending. The STN one has long series, entertaining battles, adventure, comedy, romance and so on. This book was a little dull.. Not much adventure. And the battle was kinda lame. It wasn't very entertaining to read. It didn't give the reader the emotion, the satisfaction most readers are looking to feel when reading these minecraft books. It was a quite plain story plot. It was mainly.. Eat, sleep, do stuff with steve, fight with steve, blah blah blah i'm bored now. This was mostly boring dialogue. And the ender dragon getting mad cuz of a stupid spawner?? C'mon. ;-;
(No offense, love yo books, but this one needs improvement.)
Ideas--😏
1: longer book. This was quite short..
2: better story plot.. The plot for this book was quite bland and random.
3: Less dialogue. And if your ganna keep dialogue, at least make it interesting! 😐
4: better fights. And add more dramatic scenes!! Plus,, why not some casualties?? At least make 3-7 people die for extra emotional effect!! And the main character(s) should at least go through SOME sort of emotional breakdown or something.. It cant just be: "this fight is so easy. Haha, were so strong, the worlds flowers and lollipops for us! Happy happy, nothing but happiness!!" . At least change the plot a little better?
5: focus on one specific audience you want to please. You seem to make this book for all ages. But the truth is it would only please the 4-6 aged readers. Try to focus on pleasing a specific audience. Probably shoot for the people who will actually be able to read independent on their kindle/mobile/hardcover book. So that would mean the 8-14 age group. 😕
I'm bored. So ima make a test.
Q stands for question-
Q 1: What was the main Centaur's name?
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A: Michael
B: cameron
C: Zachary
D: Charlie
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Q 2: why did the villager leader want the main centaur (not givin' away answer) to befriend steve??
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A: So they can learn how to craft. (Iron armor specifically.)
B: so they can party all day & night without having carrots.
C: uwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwu
D: nOnE oF tHe AbOvE
I'm too tired to continue. Dogwolflover826🐶🐕🐩🐺🐾 out! 😎
...more They have funny part's and she's with a to be continued... Ending.it's a Minecraft learning machine. You can learn from it ro!!!!
A very exciting! Can't wait to read the next book!!!!!!!!!!😃They have funny part's and she's with a to be continued... Ending.it's a Minecraft learning machine. You can learn from it ro!!!!
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